Nicely done. I really enjoy this type of story that has the snippets of the past that help explain or show the reasons that the character is thinking or feeling in the present. It really makes the story fuller if that makes sense. (This is why I'm a reader not a writer. lol) Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2010-07-19 01:43 am (UTC)I really enjoy this type of story that has the snippets of the past that help explain or show the reasons that the character is thinking or feeling in the present. It really makes the story fuller if that makes sense. (This is why I'm a reader not a writer. lol)
Thanks for sharing.