http://batman-mcghee.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] batman-mcghee.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] raeschae 2010-07-19 02:18 pm (UTC)

first, let me say how sorry i am for not having commented earlier. for this year's big bang, and am stock piling the fics and reading at a later date. i have only, to date, read two fics because i couldn’t wait. yours was one. and it did take me a while to get through it cause RL is being a bitch. SADFACE

but, it's all read and i must say, this was really great. you're not usually big on t he sex scenes, and i really like that. you tend to make the entire fic sexual, instead of focusing on a burst of sex, then lots of plot. i like your style; it’s like a sprinkling sex throughout. that being said, the actually sex scenes were really hot, and still very tasteful.

and the plot. these boys sure are dumbasses! but you managed to get their heads out of their butts and give us a happy ending. one that, in my opinion, deserves a follow up (say, thanksgiving oneshot?).

i loved the supporting cast's interaction as well. job WELL done, bb.

now, is it too soon to demand more disclaimer!fic? (i have a specific idea i’d really love to see written, based on recent events in my life)

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