I freaking LOVE this. I just started reading and could NOT stop. It's super cool how you told the story via all the intertwining flashbacks and multiple perspectives. That has potential to be a disaster, but it worked beautifully.
I love the distinction of Jared not being still in love, but that he's fallen in love all over again. You expressed that perfectly.
I love the way they talk about music, it makes me excited (and hopeful for a soundtrack.) I love that they're flawed but real, good guys. This is one of those fics that sort of burrows into my brain and I'm left thinking about it for a long time after I'm done reading.
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I love the distinction of Jared not being still in love, but that he's fallen in love all over again. You expressed that perfectly.
I love the way they talk about music, it makes me excited (and hopeful for a soundtrack.) I love that they're flawed but real, good guys. This is one of those fics that sort of burrows into my brain and I'm left thinking about it for a long time after I'm done reading.
Really enjoyed this, thanks for your time on it!