ext_77567 ([identity profile] erushi.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] raeschae 2010-08-19 08:25 am (UTC)

This was a gorgeous, gorgeous mix of hot, sentimental, and downright adorable. I liked how you wrote the club, how you practically made the club come alive, from the music to the (lack of) lights to the crowd pressing in. The meet-the-parents scene was deftly handled too, with as much said in the actions of the various characters and in the spaces between their words as in the actual dialogue. Loved it all! (And not just because the Black Russian's one of my favourite cocktails! *g*)

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