You did lovely work with Jared's POV - I loved his take on what was going on with them, how there were some things he'd admit to himself and some things he wouldn't - such a very REAL trip into someone's head.
And you are the MASTER of sexual tension, to the point that I don't even care if they fuck or not, the buildup itself is hot enough to make my computer spontaneously combust.
On an unrelated note... I have been SAVING the Disclaimer updates for a time when I can savor them properly - I got swamped with a combination of fic deadlines (for a few challenges) and RL, and I didn't want to read it until I can give it the attention it deserves. But that's coming up this weekend - I plan to curl up with a drink and a blanket and enjoy the hell out of it. :)
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Date: 2009-11-13 10:01 pm (UTC)You did lovely work with Jared's POV - I loved his take on what was going on with them, how there were some things he'd admit to himself and some things he wouldn't - such a very REAL trip into someone's head.
And you are the MASTER of sexual tension, to the point that I don't even care if they fuck or not, the buildup itself is hot enough to make my computer spontaneously combust.
On an unrelated note... I have been SAVING the Disclaimer updates for a time when I can savor them properly - I got swamped with a combination of fic deadlines (for a few challenges) and RL, and I didn't want to read it until I can give it the attention it deserves. But that's coming up this weekend - I plan to curl up with a drink and a blanket and enjoy the hell out of it. :)