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Title: Turnabout Is Fair Play
Author: [livejournal.com profile] raeschae
Character(s)/Pairing: Jared/Jensen, Jared/MC (not an original one)
Theme: Theme 04: Lover's Rock
Prompt(s): #03 - Slick
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: Jared already caught half of Jensen's live show in front of the studio window. Now it's Jensen's turn.

Warnings/Author Notes: Oh, you guys are gonna kill me. *facepalm*



Jared has always liked his guys a little rough around the edges, casual and relaxed. He prefers diners to expensive restaurants, and wants to chill with someone who's more comfortable in a dive bar than some fancy cigar lounge. That's probably why he's never pursued the relationship his parents wish he would with Tom, the curator of a small local history museum a few blocks away from the coffee shop.

With all the subtlety of a frying pan to the side of the head, his dad invited Tom to join them for dinner during Jared's first week back home and made it none too obvious that he thought this was the kind of guy Jared would be interested in now that he wasn't some frivolous frat boy anymore. Tom's not a bad guy or anything, but he's not exactly the kind of man Jared sees enjoying beer and nachos during Monday Night Football.

Still, Tom's easy on the eyes. Coupled with the way he sucks cock like a pro, and added to the fact that there aren't exactly a lot of openly gay men in a town this size, Jared doesn't mind having dinner with him on occasion. This occasion happens to be that Jared is so sexually frustrated he thinks he might explode, but Tom doesn't need to know that.

Earlier today, he and Jensen made no apologies for the way they blatantly hit on each other. As soon as the power flickered back on, Jensen was talking about needing to get back to work and Jared couldn't get back downstairs to check on the damn ice machine fast enough. Another hour of sweating it out on Jared's living room floor could have yielded interesting results, but Jared's pretty sure he'll never know now.

Maybe Sophia has a point when she says that “too much foreplay spoils the main event.” It's almost like they're both afraid taking it any further will ruin the fun thing they have going at this point. It's not conscious or anything – Jared's not an idiot – but the theory does carry some weight.

Jared is sprawled out on the couch, Tom's mouth hot against his throat, when he realizes he should absolutely not be thinking about Jensen right now. In fact, the whole reason that he brought Tom back to his place was so that he could forget about that guy across the street for a few hours and find some relief from all this tension that is stretching thinner by the minute.

So it's probably a mistake when he rolls his head against the arm of the couch as Tom's teeth scrape his collarbone, because that's when Jared sees the light on in Jensen's studio. The mouth against his sternum, trailing slowly down his stomach, feels good and all, but Jensen is solely focused on the face of the figure he's sculpting and it's suddenly far more interesting than the way Tom is working his pants open in this room.

“Here, wait,” Jared threads his fingers through Tom's hair and pulls on his head a little bit. “Just let me,” he grunts and struggles to sit. It's a douche move, Jared is aware of that, but Jensen's hands smoothing so gently over that clay are too irresistible. He tells himself what Tom doesn't know won't hurt him, and sinks back on the couch to get a better view of the studio. Tom is looking a little skeptical from his place on the floor between Jared's spread thighs, so Jared reaches for the back of his neck and smiles as fondly as he can. “Wanna be able to see everything.” It's not a total lie.

This has got to be some kind of sign. His crush on Jensen is bordering on a weird obsession now, but Jared can't, or doesn't want to, find the will to stop it. There's something about Jensen that he hasn't felt since college, when it was perfectly acceptable to tease someone for hours at a party before taking them home to follow through on the promises he'd been making all night. It was fun back then, and it's fun with Jensen now.

He's loose and unpredictable, intriguing and exciting. There's an honesty in the way that looks at Jared that Jared is never going to find with someone like Tom, all rigid, polished and too concerned about what other people see when they look at him. That's not the guy Jared is ready to be.

Tom swallows him down at the exact moment Jensen turns his head in the direction of Jared's apartment. The slick feeling of Tom's tongue combined with the way Jensen tilts his head and then steps closer to the window nearly sends Jared over the edge in less than a second. He really has no way of knowing if Jensen can even see him – the only light on in Jared's place is the lamp on the end table – but when Jensen abandons his work all together to step fully to the window, Jared has a pretty good idea.

A part of him wants to be embarrassed, but Tom is making the most obscene noises as he works Jared's cock with his mouth and his hand, and Jensen is watching like this is a movie he paid nine fifty to see. It's hotter than it has any right to be, and when Jensen lowers his hand to his jeans and shifts his hips, Jared can't hold back anymore.

Throwing his head back, he comes so hard the edges of his vision go dark, his breath ragged and loud in the otherwise silent apartment. When he opens his eyes again, Tom is climbing onto the couch at his side and Jensen is still staring at him from across the street.

Jared's moral line is blurring faster by the second, but if Jensen wants to watch him return Tom's favor, Jared certainly isn't in any condition to stop him.

Less Talk, More Action

Date: 2010-07-28 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nightporters.livejournal.com
Well, these boys certainly aren't shy...

Date: 2010-07-28 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
They absolutely are not! Ya know, I love some good awkward boys having trouble forming sentences around each other, too. But I've never written two blatant characters like this before, so it's kind of fun to change it up sometimes. ;)

Date: 2010-07-28 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nightporters.livejournal.com
Actually, you are very good at writing men who aren't the standard J2. That is the reason I read you.

Date: 2010-07-28 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you! I get bored reading the same things over and over again, so I try to change it up when I write it. Keeps me from getting burnt out, and hopefully keeps people interested in what I'm doing.

Date: 2010-07-28 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aythia.livejournal.com
Oh my *gulp* That was pretty damn hot...oh, I wanna get into Jensen's head! I wanna know what he thinks! (besides "guh...hot...")

Date: 2010-07-28 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
You'll find out some of what he thinks in the next installment. ;)

Date: 2010-07-28 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imaginethehappy.livejournal.com
*sputters*

dayum lady. o.O

Hot doesn't really cover it for some reason...

Date: 2010-07-28 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
\o/ Well, you wanted some sexin'...

Date: 2010-07-28 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imaginethehappy.livejournal.com
Well, i mean, if i knew I just had to bat my eyes and bedazzle a tiara... ;)

Date: 2010-07-28 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
I told you I'm easy.

Date: 2010-07-28 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] comet91.livejournal.com
*Fans self* very hot!!!

Date: 2010-07-28 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2010-07-28 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com
Mmmmm.. this just gets sexier - I love the take on the Js that you're going for here. Really upfront about flaunting themselves in front of each other now.

Date: 2010-07-28 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
:D I'm so glad you like it! I told someone earlier, I really like when one of the boys is shy and awkward, but I'm having a hell of a lot of fun writing them this way, too. More than I thought I would!

Date: 2010-07-28 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maria9631.livejournal.com
Well the title says it all. I'm enjoying their foreplay, best get it out of the way now so when they get together they can just go at it. Lol

Another wonderful chapter!

LOVING IT!!!!!!!

Date: 2010-07-28 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
And go at it they will! Eventually. I'm having so much fun drawing it out that sometimes I forget I actually have to get them together at some point. ;)

Date: 2010-07-28 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maria9631.livejournal.com
Well you can leave when they get together to be the last story
Even if you write it before. I Love their flirting ways and knowing
They both want each other but might be scared to go to the next step.

Date: 2010-07-28 09:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goldie3.livejournal.com
Oh that was hot. I love how Jared and Jensen are so blatant with each other. These boys are killing me.

Date: 2010-07-28 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
They're kind of killing me, too, but in a really good way! ;)

Date: 2010-07-28 09:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blackpanther07.livejournal.com
Damn! Hot! and certainly not shy. YUM!
I am really enjoying the way you are writing the boys, I like their personality and interaction with each other. Can't wait for the next part.

Date: 2010-07-28 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you like the characterization. I don't know if they're my favorite characters ever, but they definitely rank up there with some of the most fun to write!

Date: 2010-07-28 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] velvetsun.livejournal.com
Love how you're writing these two! The hesitant way they flirt with each other in person, but Jared's overt show for Jensen here was an awesome development. (of course, that could just be my exhibitionism kink talkin' lol) I wonder if Jensen's going to up his game at all...hmmm? Can't wait to read his thoughts next!

Date: 2010-07-28 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
You never know just how Jensen will respond. ;) I'm actually working on that part right now.

I'm glad you're liking it - I'm really loving writing these guys, and the format is making for quick writing, so that's also a plus! I've never posted a WIP in this fandom, but the snapshot idea is keeping me interested, so I guess it's working out alright. :D

Date: 2010-07-28 11:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] tabaqui
HA! Mutual peeping-tom action. Silly boys!
:)

Date: 2010-07-29 03:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
It would be so skeevy if they weren't both into it, ya know? *sigh* I love fiction where things like RL creepy behavior can be hot.

Date: 2010-07-29 12:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mdlaw.livejournal.com
Well, so I read in the comments how EASY you are. If I want something all I have to do and flip my hair, bat my eyes, and ask real prudy. so here goes ahem swoosh FLIP ducks head flutters eyelashes. I think it would be great to learn more about Jensen. He soooo mysterious. flutter blush m ;)

Date: 2010-07-29 03:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
You read it right - I'm so easy, it's kind of ridiculous. And don't worry, you will find out more about this Jensen in coming chapters. I'm actually really excited to get to that part of the story.

Date: 2010-07-29 01:40 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] keyweegirlie.livejournal.com
Damn...too bad Tom wasn't the one w/Jensen a couple of prompts back, that would've been a little fun. ;)

Anyways, just wanted to say I'm loving this prompt table 'verse.
*hugs*

Date: 2010-07-29 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
I could have used Tom with Jensen - I guess I just have Ian blinders on right now. ;)

I'm so glad you're enjoying it - I'm having a blast writing it!!

Date: 2010-07-29 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earthquakedream.livejournal.com
Oh my god, this is absolutely delicious. Unnnff.

Date: 2010-07-29 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2010-07-29 05:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jana-nox.livejournal.com
Every day you make my mornings brighter (and ways hotter in this case). Thank you like A LOT!♥

Date: 2010-07-29 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
You are very welcome! And thank YOU for reading them. I'm working on the next installment right now, but it's kind of being a bear! Grrrr.

Date: 2010-07-29 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jana-nox.livejournal.com
I'm sure you'll manage to convince the next part to be a little less grouchy. You're doing pretty great so far!

Date: 2010-07-29 06:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiwiana.livejournal.com
*whimpers*

Date: 2010-07-29 11:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raeschae.livejournal.com
:D

You're welcome.

(Also, this e-mail screening thing really isn't working for me. I MISS YOU!)

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